Nuclear power,
I don’t know much about nuclear power, however, I think that can be a great
source of energy if used correctly. I remember having a conversation with a teacher
and he was telling me that nuclear power could be a viable solution to the
energy shortage problem, but after what happened in Chernobyl (human error
according to my teacher) no one would trust nuclear energy again. That really
left me thinking about how somethings can influence our decisions, for example,
I was talking to a friend a while ago and he told me how someone messed up his
brother’s tattoo, so now he doesn’t ever want to get a tattoo. I have
got to say that I am tempted to try tattoos someday, I would have to think it
very seriously because it’s something that it’s going to be on you forever,
well, not necessarily if you think of laser removing surgery, but I think that
would cost a lot of money. I’d rather be “mechoneado”, for those of you who don’t
know what that is, “mechoneo” is a “welcoming” tradition among university students,
I think that at its heart is a great way to introduce new students to the
university life (like the one that I had). I don’t know if it started with that
intention, but through the years has become more of a mocking and bullying
tradition, I sincerely don’t understand it, I think it’s at the same level as
Hooligans, saving the distance of course, as a soccer fan myself I do not get the
hooligan culture, I can understand that someone may “love” a soccer team, and that
a little competitiveness it’s always okay. But, coming to the extremes to cause
riots and actually hurt (or even kill) other people for a soccer match to me it’s
crazy.
(Trying to connect
random topics pls)

Very well done.
ResponderEliminar7 pts
what a monologue! cheers 🥂
ResponderEliminarNuclear power reminds me the serie Dark haha
ResponderEliminarGood attempt.
ResponderEliminarThough it would have been a good idea to have put it in paragraphs.
Minor issues due to connections that affect cohesion of the overall message.
Lexis is adequate.
Grammar is also adequate with minor lapses, as mentioned.
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